Wednesday, June 7, 2017

The Annotated Anthem - FREE eBook

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"It is a sin to write this..."

These immortal words form one of the finest opening sentences in all of literature. They are simple, direct, compelling, immediately prompting many questions. Why is it a sin to write? What are we about to read that is considered so egregious as to be a sin? Who is writing it, and why? What prompted this immoral action, and what will be its consequences?

Ayn Rand wrote Anthem in 1937 as a warning against totalitarian oppression and the dangers of collectivism - the ultimate result of extreme socialism in which all are made equal regardless of merits. She saw the results of this firsthand in her Russian homeland before fleeing to the U.S. This short dystopian novella presents a world where all live only for their brothers and the singular pronoun has been removed from human language.

I first read Anthem in my early teens, and have read it many times since. It was a formative influence on my deeply ingrained sense of independence and self-reliance. It was an influence on George Orwell and Neal Peart as well.

In writing my sequel to Anthem I re-read it again a dozen or more times, gleaning details and making copious notes on everything from social structure to population count. How many people live in the City? How long has it been since the Great Rebirth? What technologies are available? How many Vocations are there and what do they produce? How do the Councils function and how are they selected? The more important question in the end, of course, what "how does it all turn out?" That is the question I attempted to answer in the writing of I.

In gathering together all these details I compiled a number of lists and charts, many of which can now be found in the Archives section of my website. However, in order to facilitate a quick and easy reference I also produced what I now call "The Annotated Anthem" (complete with matching cover), an ebook edition containing 577 interlinear hyperlinked end-notes and running commentary addressing a broad range of issues, such as:
  • analysis of plot details and structure
  • character traits and motivations
  • detailed breakdown of socio-political structure
  • population count based on numbers given
  • Homes, Departments and Councils evaluated
  • technologies present or inferred in the City, as well as what is absent
  • inconsistencies and contradictions in the narrative or details
  • aspects of Objectivist philosophy considered in context
  • differences between the 1938 and 1946 editions, along with selected quotes of deleted lines
You can download the ebook free in three formats (Kindle, ePub, PDF) by clicking the image above and signing up for my mailing list (I hardly ever send out anything, so you won't be spammed, and you can always unsubscribe). If you're interested in dystopian fiction of this sort I am in the formative planning stages of an original apocalyptic fiction novel that I hope to start this summer. The mailing list will allow me to keep you posted on my progress. It may or may not be a graphic novel.

Either way, this is a chance to get a critical edition of Anthem free of charge. Rand's book is in the public domain in the U.S. where I live, but most free editions are poorly formatted or taken directly from Project Gutenburg. This edition is derived from the revised corrected text of the 1946 edition, of which I have several versions, including an original Pamphleteers edition from Caxton Press in Caldwell, Idaho.

Saturday, May 27, 2017

I: Print Edition Cover Final


I meant to post this earlier, but have been quite busy getting ready for the launch of "I" next Wednesday. This is the final "grunged-up" layout for the print edition cover, as opposed to the "clean" version posted earlier.

The image is intended to depict the "Brotherhood of Men" mural painted on the walls of the Hall of Justice by the Home of Artists, a propaganda wing of the City Council. As such, I felt the shapeless, faceless "men's room" emblem was the ideal choice to represent the mindless mass of automatons that populate the City of Ayn Rand's Anthem. "I" is the story of their liberation.

The first shipment of print editions arrived this week:


These will mainly be used as review copies and giveaways on Goodreads and LibraryThing for promotion purposes. If you would like to receive a review copy you can contact me through the link above. It is highly recommended, though not required, that you have read Anthem first. Review copies will be distributed at my sole discretion.

The print edition of "I" is distributed through Ingram, and therefore is available to order at any bookstore. It runs 251 pages (266 with front and back matter), at just around 122,000 words. Suggested retail is $12.95.

Print edition pre-orders at Amazon: http://amzn.to/2r7fUM2

Sunday, April 2, 2017

"I" Kindle Edition Available for Pre-Order


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I - A Sequel to Ayn Rand's "Anthem"

Fantasy Castle Books
ISBN: 978-0-9821538-8-8
ASIN: B06XZC2GH7251 pages
$7.95

Release Date: May 31, 2017

Available for pre-order today in Kindle format on Amazon. Print edition pre-orders forthcoming.

Stay tuned for additional content to be posted on my website, including an exclusive "Annotated Anthem" as a free download in the coming weeks.

Note also that the cover art has now been finalized. Print edition jacket art will be posted when the print pre-order page is live (this will take some weeks, as I go through Lightning Source for print on demand, and their process is somewhat cumbersome).

There will also be a free Matchbook bundle so that those who purchase the print edition will also get the ebook free.

There may also be an ePub edition at some point, but for now it will be exclusive to Amazon. This enrolls it in Kindle Unlimited, so those of you who subscribe or have Prime will be able to borrow it after its release.

Tuesday, November 29, 2016

I - Full Jacket Wrap (Clean)

NOTE: This is the initial "clean" copy before final grunge and touch-ups were applied.

Full cover mock-up, pending final page count and size. Projected page count after editorial revisions is 175 pages. The first rough draft is complete at 162 pages, barring a half dozen scenes which still need to be inserted at various points in order to tie up loose ends and provide additional back story. Editing will likely reduce the page count to some degree, although I tend to add rather than subtract with each revision.

I is a continuation of Ayn Rand's 1937 novella Anthem, first published in England in 1938, and in revised edition in the U.S. in 1946, where it is now in the public domain. This sequel begins the day after Equality 7-2521 flees into the Uncharted Forest, and explores the repercussions and subsequent effects of that event.

Since first reading Anthem as a teenager, I have long pondered what might happen after the events depicted in the novella, several hints for which are provided in its final chapters. Among the relevant passages that have motivated and inspired this sequel are the following:
"We heard that you had gone to the Uncharted Forest, for the whole City is speaking of it."
- Liberty 5-3000, upon following Equality 7-2521 into the Forest (Part 9)
"When I shall have read all the books and learned my new way, when my home will be ready and my earth tilled, I shall steal one day, for the last time, into the cursed City of my birth. I shall call to me my friend who has no name save International 4-8818, and all those like him, Fraternity 2-5503, who cries without reason, and Solidarity 9-6347 who calls for help in the night, and a few others. I shall call to me all the men and the women whose spirit has not been killed within them and who suffer under the yoke of their brothers. They will follow me and I shall lead them to my fortress. And here, in this uncharted wilderness, I and they, my chosen friends, my fellow-builders, shall write the first chapter in the new history of man."
- Equality 7-2521, in the house from the Unmentionable Times (Part 12)
Of course, it is never quite that easy to free a people who have long been subjugated. Even more so when they do not even know they are enslaved - and in this case when they have so little sense of self that they have lost the first person pronoun from their language. How one goes about achieving freedom from oppression is a question that has haunted many nations throughout mankind's history.

The only proper answer is education. For it is knowledge that frees the mind. But man by his very nature as an individual has an independent spirit that tends to chafe at constraints upon his liberty. And that spirit is both enduring and indomitable.
"Through all the darkness, through all the shame of which men are capable, the spirit of man will remain alive on this earth. It may sleep, but it will awaken. It may wear chains, but it will break through."
              - Equality 7-2521

Wednesday, September 23, 2015

"How To Make Kindle Comics & Children's Books" Version 3.0 Released

A new "3.0" edition of my Kindle fixed layout formatting guide has been released, and is available for download either from my website or from Amazon. The new edition includes both editorial revisions and content updates throughout to bring it into line with the current state of Kindle operating systems across devices and apps, based on the latest round of testing I have done.

Both the data and discussions of features and functionality have been revised, most noticeably in the Fixed Layout Functionality Chart that makes up Appendix A, where each function has been broken out into its own section so that the table data, footnotes, and commentary are all together, and inclusive of just one feature at a time, making it much easier to get a comprehensive overview of where that function stands. Moreover, the antiquated Kindle 3 has been removed and its place give over to data gleaned from recent testing of the Kindle for iOS app. The chart on the website is still in one piece as before, although I may change it at some point as well.

If you have purchased the bundle from Fantasy Castle Books you can download the updated files using the original link you were given. If you need to have the link resent please send a note via the contact form on the website and I'll get it to you. All three files in the bundle have been revised, and even if you bought the book before the PDF or EPUB versions were added, all three are now included in your download for no extra charge.

If you bought the book through Amazon you can get the update from the link provided on your "Manage Your Content & Devices" page. Amazon will not automatically send the updated version to you if you simply delete the title from your device or app and re-download it; you must do this from the Manage Your Content page in order to approve the update, since it will remove any bookmarks, highlights, or annotations you have added.

Friday, August 28, 2015

New Kindle Sample Files

Two new Kindle sample files have been added to the free downloads over on my main website. All of the sample and template files have been collected together on the Tutorial Index & Resources page for easier access, and I've made all of them free now, rather than requiring a download code.

The two new files are based on the Simple and Advanced templates, but both been slightly revised with new content and notes to augment and illustrate the features available in that particular format.

The 8-page "Basic Layout" sample uses the "comic" book-type with the auto-orientation function enabled to showcase the fact that it includes both single and two-page spreads, with and without an inner margin between them. It has no active text, no hyperlinks, and no text or image pop-ups, which cannot be added if you want these two-page layouts. It also illustrates how the Virtual Panels feature works to zoom a page, or page spread, in equally divided sections that can be swiped in sequence.

The 16-page "Zoom Features" sample is based on the Advanced template, but with the orientation locked to portrait, since in order to have region magnification you cannot have page spreads, so there's little point in making landscape available (unless the pages themselves are landscape, which these aren't). This sample showcases all of the more complex features that are currently available in Kindle fixed layouts with no book-type value added. These include both text and image hyperlinks, a linked Table of Contents page (as well a menu TOC), live text with full functionality, several methods of switching text and images for "interactive" animations, a new bilingual text example, comic panel zoom with live text in both the default and magnified regions, and "lightbox" shading both within and outside zoom areas, as well as others. Note that the interactive features do not work well on the Kindle for PC app due to its incorrect positioning of active links, so this sample must be read on an actual Kindle device.

While the companion templates have previously included both the epub source code file as well as a pre-converted mobi for reference, they will henceforth only contain the template epub file itself. Since it can be converted easily into a mobi file itself there's little reason to waste the bandwidth. And while I make these available for free, I still have to pay for file hosting and delivery, which is why I had previously charged a minor fee to those who have not purchased my formatting manual. Splitting the epub and mobi files into two separate downloads will allow me to better track what is being used and what not to waste my time updating further.

My ulterior rationale for doing this is to make these sample files more readily available for potential ebook formatting clients, to whom I send the file if they're unsure what features they want included in their project. It's often just easier to show than to explain how something works.

Finally, for those who have purchased my Kindle formatting book, there will be a new revised edition released shortly, with several updates due to the changes caused by the latest Kindle firmware upgrades, as well as some editorial revision for clarification and the elimination of a few sections that are no longer relevant. I will post when the new edition is available, and send out an email to those who have purchased though my website. Those of you who have bought the book on Amazon will have to deal with their tedious file replacement process, which has not gotten better. But more on that when the time comes.

Monday, August 24, 2015

Kindle Fixed Layout Functionality Chart Update 2015.2

For the second time this year the Kindle Fixed Layout Functionality Chart has been updated due to changes in the various Kindle reading systems. I've just completed another round of testing to determine how the latest system updates have affected functionality in fixed layouts, and some of those changes are significant, whether for good or ill.

I've also added a Change Log just above the chart to make it easier to see what's happened since the last updates, as well as adding a row denoting the latest OS version tested for each device or app.

These tests involve loading a minimum of nine different Kindle test files (more if some new variable needs testing) - each of which contain over a dozen pages that have been created specifically for this purpose - onto the seven different Kindle apps and devices I currently own. This creates a series of 72 iterations of a Kindle fixed layout file on a Kindle reading system, requiring a total of 1044 page loads (if each page is only viewed once on each system), and countless orientation changes of each device (which for the Paperwhite is a pain, to say the least), each page of which must be run through a battery of tests to determine what is working and what is not, pursuant to the ten items listed on the chart (only 8 of which I now test), and carefully noting any anomalies that occur. This tends to get somewhat confusing if one is not quite awake, and thus requires a lot of coffee (donations gratefully accepted).

The primary variables involved are the three "book-type" values (comic, children, or none), and the inclusion or absence of region magnification code in a given file. In addition, the orientation-lock variables have generally been included in the testing, with respect to page-spread functionality, which in any case has made no difference, but still has to be tested to determine that this is still true. This, of course, as with the book-type, requires a change in the metadata value, and thus the creation and conversion of a separate Kindle file for just that instance (delineated by titles such as Kindle-FXL-Comic-NoRegMag-Landscape.mobi). Region Magnification itself is dependent on its inclusion or absence within the publication itself rather than the metadata value entered, which is entirely irrelevant.

As mentioned in the notes, and obvious by the data included, I am still only testing these seven Kindle reading systems, due to lack of resources to procure more, or time to deal with it in any event. I plan eventually to get at least one HDX device, but at present just can't justify the investment, not only due to the financial expense, but as much because it frustrates me to no end how poorly the software is designed, and I'd almost rather not know what features are unsupported - or flat out broken - on yet another version of the Kindle OS. If just one feature worked the same on all devices it would make things so much easier.

UPDATE: The 'layout-blank' property has now been tested thoroughly, and the results noted.

Saturday, July 11, 2015

Kindle Publishing Guidelines 2015.2


Just a few quick notes on this latest update to the Kindle Publishing Guidelines. Most of it covers minor details, but there are a couple of interesting items. All the sections containing changes are listed in the Revision History shown above (highlights mine). Those three highlighted sections are all deletions relating to Adobe products, and along with the removal of InDesign from the list of means by which "publishers can create Kindle books in-house...using Kindle Publisher tools" in Section 2.2, expunges all prior references to Adobe in the Guidelines, save for one mention of InDesign in Section 2.3 Third-Party Conversion Services, where it's listed as a "typical input format" for outside conversions (i.e. non-Amazon related).

2.2.1 Kindle Plugin for Adobe InDesign

The deletion of this section removes any mention of the Kindle Plugin for InDesign in theGuidelines, along with the link to its web page. That page still exists, and is linked to from the side menu of the other Kindle Publishing Tools pages, but is still marked as "Beta." The removal of it here from the section on "Paths to Getting Your Content on Kindle" implies that Amazon are giving up on support for this plugin, and no longer consider it a valid path to publication.

This is not wholly surprising, given that they haven't updated the plugin (or the corresponding Kindle Plugin for Adobe InDesign Publishing Guidelines) since version 0.973 in September of 2013. In fact, they've never updated the plugin for InDesign CC, and still list CS6 as the latest version supported. But then, they still list Windows 7 as the newest PC operating system too. Until now I just presumed they were being negligent, but the intentional removal of this section says otherwise. Were they preparing to release an update they would not have done this.

2.2.1.3 Using KindleGen

Removed the "C:>" root element from the command line example.

Added a note that "zip formats are supported for XMDF and FB2 sources" and "directory formats are supported for XMDF sources."

Changed/added the following -locale element references:

zh: Chinese (from ch:Chinese)
pt: Portuguese (from bp: Brazilian Portuguese)
ru: Russian (added)
3.1.1 Text Guideline #1: Body Text Must Use Defaults

A new paragraph has been inserted to the third bullet item (detailing the range of gray-scale colors acceptable for text elements with a forced color), giving specific directions on how to determine what the gray value is for a given color. See the Guidelines for details.

3.1.4 Text Guideline #4: Other Encodings Are Supported 


Some editorial clarification here simplifies a previously convoluted and unnecessarily redundant sentence structure, while a second method for specifying HTML encoding by an XML declaration has been added:

<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
In addition, the first method (using the <meta> tag in the head element) has had its character set reference altered from the previous "iso-8859-1" to the more standard "UTF-8".

3.1.5 Text Guideline #5: Use Supported Characters and Spaces

Previously titled "Spaces and Unicode Characters," this section adds two new paragraphs stating that plain text UTF-8 should be used to represent characters (hence the change in the preceding section), except where XML entities are required. The second paragraph specifies the three instances where XML entities are strictly required, these being:

< (&lt;)> (&gt;)& (&amp;)
where the values in parentheses are required in order to avoid misinterpretation of the code by the reading system. For example, if ampersands are used in the opf metadata it will result in a failed conversion.

The example is provided here that the © symbol should be used rather than the &copy; named reference.

3.6.5 Image Guideline #5: Use GIF or PNG for Line-Art and Text

Removed the previous reference to the 127 kb image file size restriction. Now it just says "...fit the image size limit."

3.7.3 Table Guideline #3: Create Simple HTML Tables

Removed all the references to specific Kindle iterations, including the Kindle 1 with its particular issue in dealing with tables. Now it just says that <table> tags "can be displayed on Kindle devices and applications." Period. Not sure if this means the ancient K1 can now handle simple tables, or that they no longer care. The only person I knew who had one got rid of it years ago.

3.8.3 Styling Guideline #3: Design for a Good eBook Experience

A new section that adds a lengthy paragraph that is essentially useless, and includes this utterly unenforceable guideline:

Using fixed-layout format just to replicate print layout is not allowed in Kindle books because customers report this as a bad user experience.
As if they could know what your intention was. Maybe you intended to replicate the print experience, results be damned. Or maybe you just suck at formatting. Hard to say. But I guess Amazon intends to try. Does this mean they plan to start pulling poorly formatting fixed layouts? One can only hope. On that note, however, see the next section.

4.1 Metadata Fields Supporting Fixed-Layout Books

Okay, so now we come to the crux of the matter. Amazon has made a crucial change to the Region Magnification metadata description which, oddly, not only does not remove it (even though it's non-functional, and thus, irrelevant), but essentially makes it mandatory. Not the element itself, mind you, but Region Magnification itself. Here is how it now describes this element:

An optional tag for enabling the Kindle Panel View and Kindle Text Pop-Up features that are required for comics and children's books (italics mine).
I employ the italics to point out the seeming discrepancy in the statement. In essence, the tag itself is option only because it doesn't work; i.e. it makes no difference if you add it or what value to assign to it. As I have discussed both in my Kindle tutorial series and my formatting manual, KindleGen will add the RegionMagnification entity itself (and the correct value of true) if Region Mag is, in fact, present in the publication, regardless of whether you put it in the metadata or not, and will remove it otherwise, even if you enter it with a value of false. Thus, there is no point in adding it at all. The tag is truly optional.

However, according to the latter half of this statement - which is the portion added in this update - Panel View and Text Pop-Ups are now required for Kindle comics and children's books (respectively, one must presume, since Panel View is only available in comics). This is not a critical distinction for comics, however, since the Virtual Panels feature is present by default where custom panels are not provided by the content creator. Still, this statement technically makes is a requirement to include your own "Region Magnification" elements, a term the Guidelines uses interchangeably for Panel View (i.e. in the heading for section 5.4).

The real dilemma here, though, is with regard to children's books. Many Kindle ebooks of both types consist of full page images with the text included in the image. This is a poor design decision, as I have often stated, due to the loss of many crucial features, but one that is unavoidable for many ebook creators due to the cost and complexity of adding pop-up elements. According to this new addition, that is no longer an option.

Now, granted, this has technically been the case all along. Section 4.2.2 which follows this has always listed as "Requirement #2" the use of Region Magnification in children's books, rather than adding it to the later "Recommendations" section. But it has not been strongly enforced.

Does the addition of this clause imply that Amazon intends to begin enforcing this rule more diligently, and start refusing children's books with no Text Pop-Ups? Or is it just a strongly suggestive guideline that has been added in order to be more consistent with the section that follows?

Curiously, where this metadata element chart is repeated in Section 5.1 for comics the change has not been carried over. Editorial oversight or intentional omission?

8.1 Media Query Guidelines (and subsections 8.1.1—8.1.5)

Incidentally, I did not do a post when the 2015.1 version of the Guidelinse was released, as it included only this one change, although it was quite useful. This new "Media Query Guidelines" section was added which is fairly extensive and contains a lot of very helpful notes for handling backwards compatibility. This is, of course, primarily of use for reflowing ebooks, and so not as much of interest for my purposes, as fixed layouts are another beast entirely.